Hi Jazzone
You have a great hook here - drew me in
It's a bit difficult to tell who is saying what in this..
You start out saying "your" - are you talking to Toyah?
Then you tell us about the fling (I assume she's no longer there?)
Now you're calling her "she" (so I guess she isn't there anymore)
I think it would be stronger if you sorted out these point-of-view (POV) issues.
Also maybe find a better rhyme for "plans" than "plans" ??
Good luck with this one
Paul