One Day We'll Die

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tina m

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« Reply #15 on: January 08, 2017, 09:34:52 PM »
You realy sound like the guy from the Scorpions ..do i keep telling you that?
anyway I like them so it doesnt hurt to say it again :)
this didnt immediately hit me ,but I liked it a lot more the second time & then realy got into it on the 3rd listen...
you do some lovely things with pianos & acoustic guitars here..
I suppose it is a drinking song ,but the maudlin type not the 'knees up' dancing on the table sort..

great solo but it was no where near loud enough ..surely you know its impossible to play air guitar well to a quiet solo!  ;D i had to crank up my air amplifier !
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« Reply #16 on: January 09, 2017, 10:46:06 PM »
Very, very nice.  Perfect for your vocal style.  One of your best in my opinion.
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« Reply #17 on: January 09, 2017, 11:10:58 PM »
Thanks for shearing.

 ;D Some typos are worth quoting

Anyway, great title Jambrains! Death is one of my favourite subjects and you couldn´t say it more plainly here. Singing it as aggressively as you do I did get a bit nervous about the Grim Reaper showing up  :D

Anyway, I really enjoyed it. You do have a nice way with rock that´s slightly compelling to listen to. You put a lot of heart and soul into yout songs and although ithey don´t always grab me instantly, you´re honesty shines through. Like Tina said, you should turn up the solo though, it´s great and needs to be a tad more prominent. Good rockin tune!

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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2017, 07:27:08 PM »
nothing wrong with this one
like Tinam said, the solo was a bit quiet.
loved it
"not so deep"? I think it's not that shallow.

me like
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

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« Reply #19 on: January 11, 2017, 09:09:49 AM »
Hi,

The brilliant intro sounded slightly at odds with the rest of the song (IMHO) but that actually worked well ultimately. Great message in the 'enjoy yourself - it's later than you think" kind of a way

Good song that commands/demands attention

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« Reply #20 on: January 11, 2017, 07:01:12 PM »
Hey Jambrains,

Enjoyed the listen.

It's nice to hear an optimistic song, but I also appreciate the way you've done it contrasting with negatives rather than just pure positivity; making the whole thing more real for me at least.

Nice pace to it too, felt very accomplished.

Cheers,
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« Reply #21 on: January 23, 2017, 03:15:38 PM »
Hi,

Great gritty vocals and a very high level of playing and arrangement. Accomplished, polished and quality throughout. Maybe a hook short of greatness.

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« Reply #22 on: January 28, 2017, 10:53:19 AM »

 WOW  ;D ;D ;D

 Loved this JB.  Amazing build. Exquisite intro.
 Just loved the finger picking gtr......

 Great lyrics, and well delivered with that 'world
 weary' voice of yours. ;D

 Your stuff is always quality, and a high standard.
 A real pleasure to listen to.

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« Reply #23 on: January 28, 2017, 02:02:21 PM »
Hi JB,

As Bin mentions, this builds very well from the delicate intro.

It does have that aftermath to the night before feel to it - a 3am song? :)

Excellent playing and production.
Could you send some of that gravel from your voice as we have some potholes that need filling? ;D

Great stuff.

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« Reply #24 on: January 30, 2017, 07:26:19 PM »
Great intro. The tinkly piano throughout gives it something unique to go along with the rock sound.

Have to disagree with jamesh above, I think it's a great title (apart from being the obvious one given the song!)

I think you did a great job on the choruses - arranging each of them slightly differently. It helps keep it interesting.