This is a little acoustic song I finished months back but currently can't decide what to do with. I thought I would put it here for feedback and general suggestions as to the arrangement. It's basically a folk number about a very lame, teenage time I had. It all felt so real at the time, though! I'm very much after feedback on the lyrics as well as the (sparse) music, cause I think it's a piece driven primarily by the words. Thanks in advance!
https://soundcloud.com/jack-simmons-1/between-the-aisles-acousticLyrics:
Sometimes I’m lost in the world
Sweeping leaves between the aisles
And it’s wrong to say you love me
When you know our definitions aren’t the same.
I could wake up in a bed of spiders
But if you were in it too that would be okay, oh babe
Sometimes I’m lost in the world:
Being sad is so teenage
And I know my dirty shoes
Were a turn off right from the start.
I’ll see you in the newspaper
With an album or a gun
Or a man on your arm. No harm.
Sometimes I’m lost in the world:
I stopped sleeping when you said
“Too bad, I don’t care about a thing
When we’ve got a dirty bloody sink.”
If life really is this grey
Then stop the grey train I’m getting off.
It’s tough loving you.
Sometimes I’m lost in the world,
With the yellow moon like a hat on the industrial estate
I know now, that I’ve made a mistake.
To see you with your head of roses,
And me with my dead brain
Condemned to this charmless life.
Sometimes I’m lost in the world
Standing on the corner where you told me you love me.
It’s too bad I know you only love me when you’re sad.
Sometimes I feel that I am only
An extension of you but you’re not in the world.