Hi again!
Here's another song for our songwriting diary. This one is already uploaded on Youtube so for this song we can't take your feedback and fix the song as we did to some extent with our previous posts here. Still really want a review though! Both on production and the song.
And it would be much appreciated to get feedback on the whole concept of this songwriting diary we're doing. Is it boring? Does it work? How could it be more interesting? Does one understand what it is about? Does one get the concept at all? This is something we're modifying and creating as we go right now, and constructive feedback would be gold. We know this might be the wrong forum for such feedback, but why not give it a try!
Thanks a lot for listening! <3
(lyrics subtitled in the video)
But here they are anyway:
I got lost inside
a good looking place I'd come along
In time I'll find a safe place to break to clear this mind
Rewind, so blind, it just took some years to realize
So I'll seek, I'll grind, I got mine, I got all the time
I got mine and all the time
I got mine
It's time, do not stop the rhyme
Just keep humming to find what's there for you
It's about time you wrote your line down
We've got time, we've got all the time
Keep it simple but we're moving real fast
Keep it simple gotta make this mood last
On a rhythm when we're beatin' so close
Found our secret and nobody knows
Yeah nobody knows
/R&L