Well here's one that I never thought would end up on here.
I finished it as a piano sketch about a year ago and filed it in my 'naff' folder. A couple of months ago I had the chorus to a song stuck in my head and eventually I realised I'd written it, it was my naff song!
I decided that it might have merit so I've written a new middle 8 and had another go at it, I'm still not sure but here it is anyway.
https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/baby-2016-m-blairThere are a couple of production issues I'm not happy with but I've had to cut myself off from working on it any more for now. I'll go back to it at some point when other ideas have had a look in.
All comments welcome.
Baby - © M Blair
Verse
Every time I see you It hurts me inside...coz
you give off a coldness your eyes just can't hide
Do you really want me or are you just playing games.
Verse
When i touch your body I feel you withdraw...and
Any time I kiss you you never want more
I can't help but want you but do you still feel the same
Bridge
When your near me I start burnin up my body's on fire, and I think I like it
But do you feel the heat do I ignite your body and and mind won'y you tell me tell me
Chorus
Baby, are you thinking bout me lately baby
Or are you calling someone else
Baby don't you know it's driving me crazy
Are you leadin me on
Verse
If you dont want me just be straight with me please...coz
I'm really struggling with the signals recieved
You say you love me but there's something that's just not right
Verse
Are you spending time with somebody else...and
When your with me are you thinkin of them
If Im wrong then why won't you put up a fight.
Middle 8
When it all breaks down, when i’m not around don’t you tell me your lonely
we’ve both made mistakes but baby all it takes is just a second to phone me
just stop playing games, before it gets to late
I’ll forgive it all, it can be like before but I’m not gonna wait