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Song in progress - Rut Number 8327 - for feedback

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JHoos

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« on: December 02, 2016, 10:11:18 PM »
Hi all,

I had such useful feedback on the last song I posted in the forum that I thought I'd add one that was not quite finished.  The original idea I had was for an instrumental scottish/folk type ballad - as you can see that didnt work out !  Its more experimental, but I've really enjoyed doing it.  Some notes:

 - I like the space, so am not definite about adding drums or bass
 - havent really thought about the ending, and its probably too abrubt, so needs some work there
 - this is partially mixed, but any comments on that side of things would also be appreciated

 - feel free to rip in !



Many thanks

John

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« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2016, 08:15:48 PM »
Hey JHoos,

Sounds good, digging the instrumental and especially the guitar over the middle.

Any chance of posting some lyrics? It helps review and..

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« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2016, 06:57:46 PM »
Hi,

Sorry about that.  I'm always embarrassed about posting lyrics, as mine are usually pretty dull/rubbish, as demonstrated by the following ! :

Stuck Now, I try to move on
I play the same thing, I try and I try
Same thing, over again
Cant think of the words, cant think of the song

Stuck now, I try to move on
Stuck now, stuck now
Stuck now, I try to move on
I try to move on
I play the same thing, I try and I try


Thanks

John