Very nicely done. I started to listen through the iPad speaker and quickly realised, no, this one deserves headphones and boy am I glad I did.
Very nice vocals, love the left/right effect, with some beautiful melodies and harmonies.
I might be tempted to add a bit more emphasis to the electric guitar on the solo but apart from that, really enjoyed it.
Yodasdad
Thanks Yodsdad, for listening and commenting
I wanted to keep the elect. guitar subtle.....but, perhaps a couple of more decibels couldn't hurt
Thanks, again!
What a great opening two lines "I deal with the loneliness Like combing fresh cut hair". This has a great feel to it Tom. The harmonies are awesome. Great melody and lyrics compliment it perfectly. As usual Tom, top top shelf
John
Thanks John for listening and remarking about my opening line
I appreciate it!
Yo Tom...love this song. The first thing that grabbed me were the lyrics...very poignant. The guitar picking, melodies, harmonies...all sublime. The songcraft is good as well, although like Paulski I would cut two lines off the chorus...I think its been said by that point. I love the vibrato on your voice, it is beautifully sung...although you didn't tweak it did you? It doesn't matter anyway, because the end result is superb.
Hi M&R....thanks for stopping by
I appreciate all your comments....and no, I didn't tweak this. I most all of the time never spend a lot of time on my recordings. They either come out well, or they don't. It seems,the more I work on the recordings
, the worse off they become
Hi Tom
what a great line "like fresh cut hair". Very relateable and never heard it put that way before.
The reverb is a nice way to empahsise the "loneliness" too.
I think I might have tried not to have "myself" rhyming with "itself" but, as you say, some things just create themselves in a certain way, and that's my only slight questionmark anyway.
Very nice big sound on your voice(s) there!
All the best
Adam
Thanks Adam
very classicaly classy my friend..everythings been said so wont say it again..you might get bigheaded...
.................too late
That's OK......I work for a living, so it never stays big for long
Thanks, Shadow, for all your support!
And thanks to all who have listened!
-T