I love this set of lyrics. Well-crafted, a clear narrative and fresh-sounding with some real stand out lines. One of my favourite lyrics that I've read so far on these pages (admittedly, I haven't been here as long as most others!).
If you don't mind the slightest neg from a relative newbie, these two lines, 'Sweet honey of fame'
and 'dimming love's flame' just seemed to be the only time the words tipped into a slightly more well-worn path. They're not 'bad' by any means, but the rest of the lyrics are so good, that anything in the least contrived (which is a much harsher word than I mean, but I can't grasp the right one, as i'm really tired and need my bed!!) is probably thrown into relief. I also have a mild dislike of the oft-used pairing of 'sweet' and 'honey' so feel free to ignore that completely!!
I also agree that 'Sometimes we hunt and sometimes we're prey' didn't sit quite right for me either, but honestly, these are tiny points. It's a great write - I really, really like it.