Hi All
After a frustrating year off due to having an extension on the house built, I've now got the keyboard and the computer out of storage and at last have my very own music room for the purpose.
This song is a rather bitter and twisted effort about an abusive relationship. The song has stayed in my head for the last 22 years or so as I always rather liked the tune even if I've long since forgotten the awful feelings that inspired it. I've updated the lyrics a bit as I'd barely started song writing when this song first came to me and I guess they are still a bit basic.
As usual, the vocals are somewhat challenging for me, but I would love to here your views on the song and also the mix as I've been messing around with mastering and never seem to get it to sound right away from the monitor speakers.
Thanks
James
https://soundcloud.com/james-homewood/thornsCut down these thorns and build me a home
And I will be happy with you, she said
But if you defy me, Ill throw the first stone
Ill take all I gave you and leave you alone
You can support me, and Ill be ok
And when I dont need you, Ill throw you away
You have my problems, and Ill have your life
Find me the answers and Ill be your wife
Out of the darkness the path became clear
Then without thinking I fell down again
again, again
Ill be your angel, the one you admire
And you will surrender to what you desire
You can carry on living, under command
And you will adore me Just as I planned
I need you completely, There's no compromise
Forget those who doubt me, who say that I lie