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Slut Drop

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Stewpot99

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« on: November 18, 2016, 12:12:12 AM »
A short demo of something I'm working on at the moment, just wanted to get a bit of feedback to see if I'm on the right track in the pop genre as I'm new to it...

Words aren't completed still working them up but will post when they're done

Slut Drop by Netrider

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Sing4me88

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« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2016, 12:50:03 PM »
I like this. The title/hook has a real pop feel to it though I have to say I expected something that would be written from the female protagonist perspective - ie Riri, Miley or Ke$ha style.

The chorus is good and flows nicely but I think you could make more use of the 'slutdrop' hook and repeat it a few times. I'm not sure about the instrumental break that follows the pre. I kinda feel it'd be better to build to the chorus quicker and then repeat the chorus rather than have valuable time taken up by the instrumental. I guess you could work in a synth hook in this section and that might work - it'd have to be uber catchy a la Avicci I'd guess though.