Hi peeps
Ok, so I wrote these lyrics and then a rubbish song to them. Anyone else fancy a crack at the music and melody and the whole other shebang? As a slight departure for me, this is a love song. I don't normally delve into such turgid affairs of the heart but passion overtook me. Let me know, thanks.
MartynRich
Thank You
Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away
Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away
But I can build a wall around me
I cant split in two whats one
My heads still spinning with the softness
When you fired your loaded gun
Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away
You can build a wall around you
So high I couldnt climb
But I could dig beneath the rubble
When I brought it down with dynamite
(Bridge)
When it comes it comes in waves
Youre a swimmer so you say
Prefer your secret garden
With that big oak tree
Now youre there and its not with me
Chorus (x2)
Second chorus
Thank you
For saving my life
I cant look twice
Just gotta turn away