Collab wanted for lyrics

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MartynRich

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« on: November 09, 2016, 09:34:50 PM »
Hi peeps

Ok, so I wrote these lyrics and then a rubbish song to them. Anyone else fancy a crack at the music and melody and the whole other shebang? As a slight departure for me, this is a love song. I don't normally delve into such turgid affairs of the heart but passion overtook me. Let me know, thanks.

MartynRich

Thank You

Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away

Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away

But I can build a wall around me
I cant split in two whats one
My heads still spinning with the softness
When you fired your loaded gun

Thank you
For saving my life
On a Friday night
When you threw it away

You can build a wall around you
So high I couldnt climb
But I could dig beneath the rubble
When I brought it down with dynamite

(Bridge)

When it comes it comes in waves
Youre a swimmer so you say
Prefer your secret garden
With that big oak tree
Now youre there and its not with me

Chorus (x2)

Second chorus

Thank you
For saving my life
I cant look twice
Just gotta turn away

Neil C

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« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2016, 08:38:48 AM »
Martyn,
I'll have a go if you like. It's got a nice flow. I've got some time week after next. Please send me a pm if you'd like me to proceed and we'll take it from there.
 :)
Neil
songwriter of no repute..

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« Reply #3 on: May 19, 2018, 11:21:10 AM »
did it work out?