Ok, back again. I found it difficult to find any time at all so have been slacking on feedback a little, so please forgive me and I'll try catching up!
Now I'm not too sure what to think with this one. I get a feeling that overall as a song it may have regressed from my last submission, but is one of those 'one step back' situations where I will learn from the pitfalls of this submission given the new elements I'm trying out.
The main 'new' thing in this song is the electric guitar - which has been mentioned as a possible addition in multiple feedbacks I've had - so let me know how this goes down. Apart from that I'm still doing the rhythm on my nylon and have tried to add some 'sparkle' with the keyboard.
Bit of a stroppy song - my eczema was flaring up and as with most things that pi** me off, a song was born. I tried to use hyperbole to make it more of a fun concept rather than sulk, but not sure how that came off?
https://soundcloud.com/namelessmc/tied-and-sick(Version updated from feedback
here, but still a bit rough think this is as far as I can take i though)
Lyrics:
ChorusI'm tired and sick of bleeding
On every bed I sleep
I'm tired and sick of worrying
about everyone I meet
I'm tired and sick of ruining
Every sofa which I sit
They say "Nameless that looks painful"
Yeah - just a bit
Verse 1'Cos the pain is uncomfortable
The doctors don't do f*ck all
Binoculars don't help at all
Agitated and looking sore
Pre-Chorus How'm I suppoed to have self-respect
When I walking 'round with my health-unchecked
Nobody thinks it's a healthy-red
When I'm wearing short sand they see-my-legs
ChorusVerse 2Leave bits of myself, whenever I roam
You'll be vacc'ing for week if I visit your home,
Because I'm peeling, I'm peeling, right down to the bone
Skelatized, and completely alone
Pre-Chorus 2How'm I supposed to find-a-body
When I'm walking 'round looking awful-sorry
I know you don't want to hear-this-sory
But listen now 'cos I'm in-a-hurry
ChorusVerse 3I ent got much time,
I can feel it in the air,
Next time you come to see me,
No one's there....
Chorus