[JHoos]

Many thanks Keith.  Yet again, some very good feedback !

Cheers

John

[Neil C]

John,
Enjoyed that mid paced rock. Like the delicate piano bits, worked really well. Liked you vocals too. Solo neat. Perhaps the drums which are great need to a little less prominent in the mix.
Shades of chillies perhaps?
 
Neil

[JHoos]

Thanks Neil !

[RothenborgLopez]

Hi!

Actually listened twice. Liked the overall vibe. Slow, grungy rock with emotion in it. Nice guitar parts. Nice bass parts. Good work.

-I would definitely up your vocals a bit. Make them a bit more wet, because they sound a little bit dry to me. Or maybe they sound dry because they don't sit well in the mix.
-I would also give the guitar a little bit more of the low end because it doesn't sound as "full" as I feel like it could.

Other than that, I think the mix sounds good. WOuld need just a little more thickness overall in my personal opinion.

It was a good listen!

[JHoos]

Many thanks !

John

[adamfarr]

Loved all the elements here - drums, bass and guitars all working together well. Vocal worked well too though perhaps could be a little more expressive with a little more light and shade? I really wanted to see the lyrics...

[JHoos]

Many thanks Adam - and I agree with the light and shade comment, which it needs.

Lyrics as follows:

V1 - how do I say this, the words to find
       It gets so hard to ease my mind
       The things you want to hear from me
       I express them now for you to see  (the things you want to hear from me)

Ch - Things to say, things to hide
       People who want inside my mind

V2 - Now you see my quiet side
       My feelings are a from to hide
      Between the lines is what you see
      And what you think is not for me

Last Ch - Things to say, things to hide
             People who want inside my mind
             Tryin to pry, you scare me away
             What is mine, is mine to stay

Cheers

John