EDIT: I updated the song by changing the lines around in one verse and making the final three choruses more consistent (and getting rid of that last "them"). And diademgrove added some "slap back" for me (never heard the term before!). The new version is now posted at the link.Here's my entry! Ta da, and all that!
This is a 1+1. I experimented a little. I figured a spooky theme was the perfect place to try something new. I added reverb to give it some chills. And I used my "new" electric guitar and added tremolo to it. I saw an "effect" in Audacity and tried it out.
I tried adding a bass line, but I mucked it up a lot. I only allowed two tries (more than two times starting and stopping the recording, though...I worked on one try a bit, then deleted the whole bass track and tried again. Ended up deleting the track again.
I thought about fading out at the end, which is why there are three choruses (besides the fact it is so short), but changed my mind.
Feedback ideas: should I have faded out at the end? Too much reverb? Tremolo? Are the words okay? Any ideas for improvements? I know the production can be muchly improved by someone who knows what they're doing. I also thought about adding some eerie vocal effects but couldn't figure out what, exactly, so ideas in that area are also welcome.
Here's the link:
https://soundcloud.com/caliamoko/how-did-they-get-hereHere's the lyric:
HOW DID THEY GET HERE
Copyright © 2016 Vicki Faye
VERSE 1
The big moon shines from a blackened sky
On a parade of my ancestors passing by
There's great granny Jane and her husband John
He died before my daddy was born
CHORUS 1
How did they get here; what do they want
Are they looking for someone to haunt
How did they get here; what do they want
Are they looking for someone to haunt
VERSE 2
The shrieking of ghosts fills the night with fear
The cackling witches on broomsticks appear
Then, riding the wind, the banshees arrive
And the spector of death with his menacing scythe
CHORUS 2
How did they get here; what do they want
Are they looking for someone to haunt
How did they get here; what do they want
Are they looking for someone to haunt
BRIDGE
It's Halloween, ghouls and goblins and ghosts abound
It's Halloween, skeletons are rising out of the ground
CHORUS 3 (x3)
Where did they come from; why are they here
Are they looking for someone to fear them
How did they get here; what do they want
Are they looking for someone to haunt
***
The photo is actually my great granny Jane and her husband, my great-grandpa John.
Vicki