time to say thankyou to everyone for listening & the comments & opinions
yes the bass did not come out properly.. it sounds fine at home but it always seems to happen to me I make it into a mp3 upload it to youtube & the sound gets mangled... usually the bass disappears a bit or the cymbals sound horrible...i was disapointed the way it sounded on youtube
the maniac laughter at the end is not from wipeout its from freesounds & its a woman.. I tried to make her sound more crazy than it was & she ended up sounding like a man
I just could not get Marts voice to sound clear ...I am not a expert with EQ I dont realy know what im doing there but often I can fiddle around till things sound right but this time I just couldnt get it right without having him too loud for the backing
derek you are right about the story being a anticlimax at the end..i suppose I thought its a fun song it doesnt matter when I wrote it...but after you said it I thought yes I shouldve written a better ending
thanks for the great compliments about my guitar playing
I realy like the combination of male & female voices in this & am working on a new one hopefully with another guy..i shall be holding auditions