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"Victim" - from New finished EP 'Misstreated' -

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« Reply #15 on: July 14, 2016, 02:07:53 PM »
I liked the song but agree with Daniel, it needs a bit of polish.

I hear a few lose timing things in places that could be fixed up. And generally it sounds very dry, especially on the vocals. Too much reverb can sound bad on used with care, using it for effect and using the lack of it for the same can be really great. The vocal, especially in the chorus need something on them IMHO.

The guitars are a little too loud in places relative to the vocals.

But overall it's good stuff, good song nicely arranged.  :)

Tom.

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« Reply #16 on: July 16, 2016, 04:51:50 PM »
Again,

Like others not my favourite genre, but having listened I do think it is a very good song within its genre.

The song is well produced and the singer is excellent. Excellent guitars.

Not sighted on the lyrics , but can make them out easily enough.

Like the different sections.... Feels like a hit if released.

Sandeep

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« Reply #17 on: November 15, 2016, 02:18:40 PM »
thanks for the feedback that's great to hear.

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« Reply #18 on: November 15, 2016, 04:49:49 PM »
I'm no expert when it comes to composition and recording but it sounds good to me.  Can imagine it going down well in my local.

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« Reply #19 on: November 15, 2016, 04:56:19 PM »
nice track
must be a blast to play
strong thought provoking lyrics

reminds me a bit of the jam
angry energy
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

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« Reply #20 on: November 15, 2016, 05:37:31 PM »
Hi

You must've been busy getting the rights on all the video footage. Still I guess the US Air Force/Navy are cuddly institutions and would have obliged, no problem!  ;)
Seriously great sound, great bass, could've let the (strong) vocals rip a bit more though, could hear the Nirvana (ish) influences I guess combined with the video you could call it "Top Grunge"  ::)

Sorry, couldn't resist!  ;D

Great work

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