Hey all,
Thanks for the feedback again, glad you're not tired of me yet and it's all much appreciated, still at the start of my journey but feel like I've made so much progress from the feedback on these songs and from listening to others.
TinaHaha dont be silly, I'm blessed to have you listen and give feedback, and this did get shoved out of sight by a barrage of outstanding Spooky entries.
Cheers for the positivity again, no vibe unfortunately (might have to invest in them) but maybe something more similar to your doorbell, this keyboard is one crazy instrument with a whole host of
pre-set sounds I dont even know which ones I ended up using.
Also nice to get support on the nylon, it is my most enjoyable though I'm still going to have a crack at the electric as soon as I can be bothered to 're-string it!
Recording quality will come eventually, think Ill experiment with the gear I've already got see I'd I can improve the quality if I record the guitar and vocals as seporate tracks then mix, though I'm sure this will lose something in the process.
NeilHey Neil thanks for taking the time and cheers for the positivity around the style, don't think I could change it if I tried so would be screwed otherwise!
Good to hear the change between chorus and verses worked for you also, I'm not too sure if there are guidelines on chord diffences between the two so relieved I didn't mess it up.
PhilGood old Phil
Love the positivity really helps to spur me on! Hopefully you're not leading me into despare might end up quitting my job and trying to go pro
Thanks for the compliments on the lyrics, I did have my original interpretation but it changed so much throughout I thought sharing would spoil, nice to know these worked for you - it is a thin line between ambiguity and nonsense!
It is very hard not to sound sci-fi using that keyboard regardless of the settings I use, but no not deliberate and I dont think inspired by a 1970's film, but it's fantastic that it took you there and you must share which one!
VerlonHaha that's fantastic, two listens to make it work is fine with me, massive smile on my face to think you were singing along!
Thanks me for the positivity I'll be sure to keep working in hope to get you singing along again!
YodasdadHey, don't think we've crossed paths before pleasure to make your acquaintance.
Feel like I mention it to much but you're right on being new, Ive be done plenty of 'raps' so I'd like to think I'm a little stronger in the lyrics and rythem, but definately still at the start of a massive learning curve with the rest of it, like melody, instruments and structure!
Thanks for the kind words, I love that this forum embrasses all level of ability and doesn't shun away us 'noobs' and instead takes the time in to help us progress.
Cheers for the feedback on the keyboard, I am just winging a lot at the moment (with I could take out more time to do these properly but just get too excited then move straight on to the next one) and its nice to have a good ear to point these things out.