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diademgrove

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« Reply #15 on: March 21, 2017, 09:50:10 PM »

Hey Keith just wondering, you got a nice melody there jazzy blues style have an idea for it if you're interested, i be only doing vocals im off work at the moment hand injury so can you go three and a half 4 minutes with the melody, i have some lyrics in mind as well, thanks.

Thanks for the offer. I'll have a go at hitting the 4 minute mark. It may take a week or so as I've forgotten what I did.

Keith

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Oldbutyet

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« Reply #16 on: March 22, 2017, 12:13:21 PM »

Hey Keith just wondering, you got a nice melody there jazzy blues style have an idea for it if you're interested, i be only doing vocals im off work at the moment hand injury so can you go three and a half 4 minutes with the melody, i have some lyrics in mind as well, thanks.

Thanks for the offer. I'll have a go at hitting the 4 minute mark. It may take a week or so as I've forgotten what I did.

Keith

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Okay Keith PM sent

Darren1664

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« Reply #17 on: April 01, 2017, 12:07:59 PM »
Hey

I'd written some lyrics for a track for someone from another board but they weren't what they were looking for so I'd thought I'd share them here. They might be a bit cheese on toasts and the subject matter not the happiest but I am happy for anyone to use them if they have a use! Feel free to amend as necessary

Braver than brave

I was tired and broken and would have left this world behind me
If I knew for sure that I’d hold you again
Feeling crushed; I’d loved and lost
How do I move on?
Oh, how I needed you then.

You told me that I would fill my heart with sorrow
You begged me to try and love somebody new
The years rolled by, I moved on with life
I learnt to love again
But I still need you now.

Love transcends through flesh and bone
I still feel your love burn within my soul
Some body loved is never truly gone
‘cause in our hearts, you live on

Braver than brave; your last words when you were bound
To slip away into the night was to tell me that it’s going to be all right
You said ‘Hey, it’s going to be OK’

Then you held me for the final time
You squeezed me and to where your life begun
You said, ‘I love you mum’.

All the best
Darren
« Last Edit: April 01, 2017, 12:11:46 PM by Darren1664 »