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IronKnee

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« on: September 20, 2016, 07:44:59 AM »
Hi everyone....I have this Spooky or What lyric that could use some music.......anyone?

“CALL ME SUPERSTITIOUS”
by Tom Tognaci

v
Call me superstitious
But there’s a full moon on the rise
It’s got me a bit suspicious
A word of caution to the wise
There ain’t no silver bullet
And God don’t hear my sorry cries

v
Call me superstitious
Listen up now that’s not all
It got me a bit suspicious
when my mirror took a fall
What’s not spelled out in the tea leaves
Is written on the wall

b
She walked in like an angel
up to the bar at 3 AM
But what laid in bed beside me
When I woke up was looking grim

v
She had spiders in her garden
A broom of straw stood by the bed
I asked if she smelled sulpher
That’s when her eyes turned ruby red
yeah, there’s a doll of me she’s pinning
I’m the poster boy for the walking dead

v
So, call me superstitious
But the midnight hour’s close at hand
Paranoid or just suspicious?
A little of both, I do contend
But that telephone keeps ringing
With no one on the other end.

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Neil C

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« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2016, 12:24:41 PM »
Tom,
Like it and I'd love to do something with it. Please let me know if you're up for it.
 :)
Neil
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IronKnee

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« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2016, 03:23:58 PM »
Tom,
Like it and I'd love to do something with it. Please let me know if you're up for it.
 :)
Neil

Hi Neal......got this lyric....this needs a melody and music. Any ideas??
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Neil C

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« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2016, 08:11:08 PM »
Tom,
On to it, give me a couple of days and i'll get back to you.
 :)
Neil
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IronKnee

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« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2016, 07:30:44 AM »
Tom,
On to it, give me a couple of days and i'll get back to you.
 :)
Neil


Right on, Neil........looking forward  ;)
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« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2016, 07:42:07 AM »
Just a comment.  Marvelous lyric.  Can't wait to hear what Neil does with it. 
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IronKnee

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« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2016, 05:14:50 AM »
Just a comment.  Marvelous lyric.  Can't wait to hear what Neil does with it. 

Neil has done a superb job with the music and production :o..........the anticipation for its release is killing me 
                           8)-Tom
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