Hi All,
I hope you're all well. Haven't posted any work for a while but trying to get back into the habit of writing. Any feedback on the below would be much appreciated. It am imagining it in a slow RnB style.
Love Stepping
V1
From the day that we first met it was evident
That what you planned for me was far from innocent
I let you take control but that was my first mistake
Cos once you'd taken hold I had feelings I couldn't fake
Chorus
As I take one step closer boy you push me away
We've got this two step playing and this game needs to change
Because my love can't take it, my love it can't take it
When you're always stepping away
Away, away
V2
You've been running rings boy you're keeping me on my toes
Hiding me away like a secret that no-one knows
When we're all alone how much you want me is plain to see
But in the view of prying eyes the story changes, we'll never be
Chorus
As I take one step closer boy you push me away
We've got this two step playing and this game needs to change
Because my love can't take it, my love it can't take it
When you're always stepping away
Away, away
V3
You took to messing with my mind now's the time that I'm through with that
I'm going to walk away, don't cry too hard as I turn my back
We could of had it all but the commitment you couldn't face
And now you're all alone, you're done with keeping me in my place
Chorus
As I take one step closer boy you push me away
We've got this two step playing and this game needs to change
Because my love can't take it, my love it can't take it
When you're always stepping away
Away, away