I thought I'd submit this lyric for review. Full take can be found
https://soundcloud.com/calebrianmusic/whats-become-of-usWhat's become of us?
God you look a state
You said you'd be here about eight
But it's quarter to one
And I don't care who you blame it on
I already know just what you've done
Tell me What's become of us?
Where's the smile gone from your eyes
Am I the one who make you cry
When you're sitting alone?
And who's been calling on the telephone
Is he the reason why you're never home
Tell me What's become of us?
Do you ever stop to think just what you've put me through
After everything I've sacrificed only for the love of you
Bot what else can I do I want you still?
I'll carry this until you walk away
So much I'm scared to say
I'm keep it to myself
Just for me and no one else
I'm happier used
Cos I know I'm not the one you'll choose
But for now I cant bear to lose you
Tell me What's become
What's become of us?