Hate 'bumping' my post just wanted to acknowledge comments...I wont say another word until this song is out of surgery
Trimming it back to the three minute mark would have a much bigger impact on the listener
I'll aim for three minutes, not sure I'll succeed! but I get where you're coming from Skub... thanks for taking the time to listen/comment
I like the song enough....what struck me was your vocal register. You can sound like Neil Young, if you want too...the recording is a bit muddled.
Tom, many thanks... as part of the editing process I will try also to add a little clarity.
Flattered by the Young comparison though but wow, I can't go
that high!
I hate editing stuff down too
Rightly, thanks for the feedback... it'll be tough (but necessary) giving this one a severe haircut
Look forward to hearing the slimmed down version.
Thanks Anita, dieting is always difficult though!
ha I love the cat juxtaposition
Thanks mate and Sirius being the dog star I worried people would cringe!
Thanks again to ALL