Pocket of sunshine

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tammynone

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« on: September 22, 2016, 04:21:41 PM »
Hi, so i have put up 2 recordings, the main one i want feedback on is "pocket of sunshine" because the other one hasn't been mastered.

So i was going for a feel good r&b/pop tune, let me know what u think of it. Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/tammy-none/pocket-of-sunshine-tammynone24googlemailcom-copyright-contact-tammy-none

CaliaMoko

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« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2016, 04:57:09 PM »
Hi tammynone.

I'm not trying to be rude, but I recommend you read the guidelines. One song is allowed per 14 days, and you need to post the lyrics.

I did listen to part of the song, but I can't understand all the words, so I'll wait until you post the lyrics before I listen to the rest and give any feedback.

Welcome to the forums! I think you'll like it here. We have a very nice and friendly community. Why not hop over to the introductions forum and tell us a little about yourself?

Vicki

Neil C

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« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2016, 06:49:50 PM »
Hi,
Well I enjoyed this gentle peice of R&B, it all skanks along to a great groove, and does make you feel happy.
Re the forum its a bit of give and take, the more you review and help others the more you'll get back in return.
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Neil 
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« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2016, 07:48:07 PM »
Hey !

I don't understand, is it something already on radios ?

It sounds f**** professional with a lot of groovy stuff...

The voice seems to be a mix between adult and child, it's so strange...

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« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2016, 04:25:51 PM »
Beautiful tune.


Excellent production....is that you singing too?



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