https://www.facebook.com/groups/2448306180/permalink/10154406035341181/?comment_id=10154406283326181¬if_t=group_comment¬if_id=1474483393105420hi guys
have been writing songs for about a week now and wanted some feedback ( please be honest )
i wrote this 2 days ago.
oh you better run boy ( verse 1 )
because im coming for you
im gonna shoot you down
becuse youve been a fool
cant you read the signs
they say dont tresspass
and yet here you are
standing on my grass
OH YOU BETTER RUN BOY ( Chorus )
THIS IS YOUR ONLY DAMN CHANCE
you think your free ( verse 2 )
coming on my field
well now your mine boy
and things are gonna get real
i can see your head
poking through the corn
when im finished with you boy
youl wish you wasnt born
OH YOU BETTER RUN BOY ( chorus )
CAUSE IL CHASE YOU INTO THE DAWN
oh you cant hide boy ( verse 3 )
i know your laying down
and its no use son
il just release the hounds
so i take the shot
the bullet wizzes through the green
he sees his chance
he spots a gap in the trees
he runs for his life
the hounds are on his 6
he jumps with all his might
over a pile of bricks
OH YOU BETTER RUN BOY ( chorus )
IF I DONT CATCH YUO IL BE PISSED
hes almost made it out ( verse 4 )
hes nearly at the bridge
but the boy falls down
and he breaks his wrist
the boy then turns around
and he looks real mean
hes full of built up rage
the reddest eyes id ever seen
OH YOU BETTER RUN MAN ( chorus )
THIS BOY WILL TAKE YOUR HEAD OFF CLEAN
if i dont shoot now ( verse 5 )
i know il be dead
after i hear the bang
i can see straight through the hole in his head
the boy just stands there
so i shoot him twice
he doesnt budge again
then he lunges at me with a knife
I SHOULDNT HAVE RUN MAN ( chorus )
THIS BOY HAS TAKEN MY LIFE