Christ that's retro. Good stuff. Great voice.
Only one thing, the lyric could be crafted on a little more, only in my opinion.
Hi Caleb....thanks for stopping by for a listen, and by commenting 
I would like to ask you, however, as to what you mean by this being retro? Could you please explain what this is being compared to 
And what do you mean by your wish that this lyric be "crafted on a little more"? On a little more what 
I'm sure you have some answers, and I'm looking forward to hearing more
Thanks, again....
Tom don't take offense. My retro comment was a compliment, thought the instrumentation was early 70's singer songwritier-esque and in a world where Adele, Rhianna and Mumford and Sons are all huge I don't see there being a limit or a certain mold we need to choose to present our music as long as it's done from the heart, people will buy into it.
Lyric wise my opinion is simple, I thought the use of the word desire in too different contexts in two different sections was a little clunky that's all.
Hey there Caleb......no offense taken. I just wanted some clarity.
Retro....ok...70's....cool!
Clunky....ok......everything I write is clunky
Where would I be, if not clunky
.......oh, ya, rich & famous
Thanks Caleb for answering.
-Tom
