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« on: August 29, 2016, 03:15:13 PM »
This is a piano melody of this song I've compose, if you are interesting let us finest this song.



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LOVE
©2016 Irwin Abrigo

(1st Verse)
Sometimes
I realize
Like a miracle
I’m cured inside

That’s how
I’m feeling
Right now

Some people
Never fell in love
Yet they look you
In the face and say

This world
Is a crazy place
That’s what they say

They can feel
Nor understand
What is love

They would know
Nor understand
What I’m talking about
It is love

(Chrous)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

(2nd Verse)
They say
Love breaks your heart
So I’d stayed away
Without a doubt

Wanted
To find a way out
Met someone
And I fell in love

To those people
I would like to say
This world
Is a happy place

That’s what I’ll say
I can feel
And understand
What is love

I know
And I understand
What it’s all about
It is love

(Chorus)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

(Bridge)
So whenever
you fall in love
Look those people
face to face and say
This world
is a happy place
That you can say

You will feel
And understand
What is love

You will know
And understand
What I’m talking about
It is love

(Chorus)
I’m
Not the guy
Who will lay down
And die
I’m willing
To fight
To survive
And
If love
Don’t work out right
The first time
I will
Give love
A second
Try

It is love
It is love
It is love
Love, love ,love
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« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2016, 04:03:23 PM »
Irwin,

Are you able to sing this yourself at all? I have no idea how the words would fit into the note sequence I hear. I can't get a handle on the rhythm or the melody pattern. To me it sounds like a random series of notes. I can't even make out what the time signature might be. If you could sing and record even one verse of it, that would be helpful.

Vicki

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« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2016, 04:10:19 PM »
Yes Caliamoko, I can sing the words of my song but because I'm not such a good singer myself I will have to sent the recording of me singing this song to you.  I will sent you a PM.

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« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2016, 06:54:45 AM »
Irwin,

Are you able to sing this yourself at all? I have no idea how the words would fit into the note sequence I hear. I can't get a handle on the rhythm or the melody pattern. To me it sounds like a random series of notes. I can't even make out what the time signature might be. If you could sing and record even one verse of it, that would be helpful.

Vicki

OH YES, he can sing.  He hasn't been around for some time, but I remember his songs and vocals. 

Hi, Irwin.  Good to see you back.
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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2016, 10:25:43 PM »


HI  hardtwistmusic, I am good, okay. Nice to know that you remember me for I remember you too.

You are a very good writer.
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