[pompeyjazz]

Thanks to all for your listens and reviews. Much appreciated as ever 

John

[pompeyjazz]

Thanks Mr Rightly. Exactly what was intended 

John

[digger72]

Hi John,

The into brings the song in very nicely.
Love the overall feel of the song - busy but well thought out.
I get the later Beatles sound as well - a good thing. But there's much more floating in and out of the track.

The music actually drew my attention a bit more than the vocal at times - but as the song is about a split personality maybe that's how it should be.

Digger

[montydog]

Hi,

I can hear the Beatles thing - especially in the production and backing vocals. That effect on "personality" is weird but in a good way. The production and arrangement are clever and imaginative and perfect for the song. The chorus is strong, the rest of the melody is a little forgettable if I'm being brutally honest and the vocals are a little unsure and buried a little low in the mix. Overall though, a strong piece of work.

M