It isn't Right (Demo)

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Arthur_Satine

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« on: July 23, 2016, 11:17:55 PM »
Hello this is my second demo song "It isn't Right". Thank you for your kind comments for my first demo "Nothing In This World".

This song was written in the summer night. I was inspired by Moscow subway at night. The song is dedicated to the bad guy who hurt me and left to die.

I need some help with lyrics for this track. My english is not very well.  :)


https://soundcloud.com/mermaidrecords/erlin-roe-it-isnt-right-early-demo-2015

(Verse 1)

Elevator and sex
Babe you do it best
I'm going away, I'm going away
From this place

The Manor of death
Hunts on me everywhere
I'm running away, I'm running away
But it's coming next

(Chorus)

In the night reigns violence
From the silence I hear cry
He was trying to buy more sand for his hourglass

It isn't right (2x)

(Verse 2)

Loving you is right?
The million dollar question
The things that I want
In the middle of something special

Life from the crime
New York City around us
In the land of the blind
I have no one to trust

(Chorus)

In the night reigns violence
From the silence I hear cry
He was trying to buy more sand for his hourglass

It isn't right (3x)

(Bridge)

Police sirens light up green sky
He's dead and I don't care
With drugs I was high
But now I found out
The depths of my brain

(Outro)

Oh yeah (8x)


lubeck

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« Reply #1 on: August 01, 2016, 01:09:12 AM »
It has a quite dark tone to it, I can see it was written by night. Just for curiosity, what would be the bands you are inspired by ?

Arthur_Satine

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« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2016, 03:44:15 PM »
It has a quite dark tone to it, I can see it was written by night. Just for curiosity, what would be the bands you are inspired by ?

I inspired by Lana Del Rey, Chris Isaak and some indie music