Good evening,
Im well aware of my gross forum misconduct. im sure you know that users are unable to delete their own topics, and that is the reason for that glaring forum topic down below this one. Id like to beg for your forgiveness formally now so we can move on.
This, is actually a basically finished song. As in i dont feel like i need to add anything, just a tweak here and there. But that is why we come here isnt it?
Firstly, it is my intention to be brief on songs where i feel the lyrics speak for themselves enough. I dont want to beat a dead horse with chorus after chorus.
Secondly, i mostly write my lyrics in a sort of loose form of def poetry, only not def poetry at all. Because im singing and theres supposed to be music. So that tends to drive my lyrics structurally. Anyway, im carrying on.
Here ya go,
Skincrawl
Because im over here
They want me over there
They put me in a box
Because theyre f**king scared
And then they take your head
Fill it up with shame
But when the devil whispers in my ear
He tells me not to be afraid
(theres a music break here)
The traps have all been set
Infested in your life
They say you need a job
They say you need a wife
Who treats you like a slob
And tells you what you like
You have another kid
You trade away your life
Yeah, cuz everybody does that
Yeah, cuz thats what people do
Pay the tax and cut your grass
Kissing other peoples ass
Cuz you need to
(another music break goes here)
People walk around with their
Heads stuffed inside of a bucket.
People dont look when they
Change lanes driving a car.
(i do feel like this needs more but it might work without.)
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After that the music just brings it to an end.
Thanks for taking the time to read.
