Love the energy in this song.
Great lyrics....hints of Dylan, Bragg and Weller for me.
Guitars are providing the anger....
The song is more like a poem.
My only minor critic, is that you are trying to cram in too many of those great lyrics.
Need more of the chorus please!
Sandeep
I just to answer the last few responses in one.
I'm truly grateful for the encouragement, apparently I need it.
Good lyrics are kind of essential to me.
This one had to be wordy, I could have made a jingle out of it but I had something to say and apparently I needed this many words.
On the spot performance thing...
Well, I admit, I messed it up for months when playing live. At some point I shelved it, then a year later I dusted it off and found it easy to play. I have a lot of material but these days (n theses days I don't drink) when I play it, it does work.
God bless yous!!
