[aeum93]

Hi everyone! Well... The thing is: i have some demos that ive been doing, but i need some feedback. You can be really honest and i'll apreciate that so much. I know that i have to improve my voice interpretation, i did it really fast, just a few vox takes and some reverb

Base drumbeat, and simple bass line, but you get it.  

Lyrics in spanish, cause im from Venezuela

let me know if you think if it could be marketable or commercial... Im shit knowing that

https://soundcloud.com/andres-eduardo-33/demo-no-name-yet

Lyrics:

Verso 1:
Voy a esperar
Que pase el miedo
Argumentar,
Lo mejor que tengo

Verso 2:
Quiero que te quedes
Pero ya te has ido
No escuches tu mente
Nunca está de acuerdo

Coro:
Conmigo...
Conmigo...

Final/End:
Tal vez es mejor
Que estés así
Con alguien menor
Que te haga infeliz.

[Oldbutyet]

(You can be really honest and i'll apreciate that so much)

Your words not mine.