Thanks everyone for great comments. If the competition was meant to make us write songs about things and in styles we don't normally, then I'm probably the example!
- Shadowfax - thanks man, proper jazzers would probably have a fit over some of those chords, though!
- skogge - I think the similarity between the sections is well spotted and something I have a tendency to fall into (which is probably why I like totally different middle 8s etc.). Glad you found it catchy though! Many thanks.
- Boydie - many thanks - I think fun is what this one is all about.
- Paulski - progressions are a bit mixed it's true (verse is supposed to be based on the rhythm changes and chorus on ii-V-I). Thanks for the encouragement!
- Monty - thanks for listening - definitely take the point re the melody, ie that it could be more adventurous (though probably will be a long time before I attempt anything so jazz-like again!)
- Martyn - made you click ;-) I was a bit wary of the faux rap bit but liked it and thanks for supporting me on that! Granada has an underworld of untold stories...
