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Playboy Bunny (Bare bones comp entry!)

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Buc McMaster

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« Reply #30 on: August 14, 2016, 01:44:36 PM »
Clever, sir!  A few verse lines seem a little forced and not too imaginative melodically but overall it works very well.  Love the choppy chording with the guitar!  Well done!

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« Reply #31 on: August 15, 2016, 12:26:25 AM »
This is so clever, and so funny Adam ;D totally enjoyed the lyrics and your vocals are perfect in this  :)
Good-luck n the comp :) :)