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Playboy Bunny (Bare bones comp entry!)
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Playboy Bunny (Bare bones comp entry!)
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Buc McMaster
Open Mic
Posts: 128
Old School.
Re: Playboy Bunny (Bare bones comp entry!)
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Reply #30 on:
August 14, 2016, 01:44:36 PM »
Clever, sir! A few verse lines seem a little forced and not too imaginative melodically but overall it works very well. Love the choppy chording with the guitar! Well done!
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crystalsuzy
Stadium Tour
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Re: Playboy Bunny (Bare bones comp entry!)
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Reply #31 on:
August 15, 2016, 12:26:25 AM »
This is so clever, and so funny Adam
totally enjoyed the lyrics and your vocals are perfect in this
Good-luck n the comp
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