Hi, I'm new here, and I'd like to hear some feedbacks about my demo, "The Day of Karl Spensson". It's a song that has been inspired by some of my favourite bands: Beatles, Oasis, Rolling Stones, Kinks and Ride. Some of my songs have also hints of The Verve, Belle & Sebastian, T-Rex or even Burt Bacharach.
I'd appreciate some opinions on the melody, the mood of the song and also some advices, if you want to share it.
The lyrics are:
It's just the day of Karl Spensson
Filing for a divorce
Is it time to really move on
Or is it getting worse ?
Now, the time has stopped the street
So Karl can start to run
And who knows who he will meet
In that town of gold
Cos' he got the ti-i-i-ime
Co's he got the time to really move on,in the park
It's just the day of Karl Spensson
Watching a guitar
He'll never know what he might see
And how he will use his time
Now the time has stopped the street
Karl can start to run
And who knows who he will meet
In that town of gold
Cos' he got the ti-i-i-ime
Cos' he got the time to really move one, in the park
But you know that everything will be alright
You know that all these things will be all fine
And you know that everything's gonna be alright
You know all the these things, yeah all will be all fine
Cos' you got the tiiiime
Cos' you got the time to really move on, in the park
It's just the day of Karl Spensson
Filing for a divorce
Here's the link
Hope you'll like it