bluegrassy work in progress need input

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Toastythebear

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« on: May 25, 2016, 07:47:50 PM »

https://soundcloud.com/david-taylor-296/work-in-progress

needs lyrics, maybe a bridge.  anybody wanna collaborate? 

sparky

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« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2016, 09:33:11 PM »
i dig it!
what were you thinking bout when you came up with the tune? maybe a place to start on lyrics

Toastythebear

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« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2016, 11:00:08 PM »

not sure exactly, it just kinda came out... 

maybe something about being away from home, away from love, and trying to get back to it

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« Reply #3 on: May 29, 2016, 06:07:41 PM »
so something kinda like this

your walking on a mountain ridge looking over the mountains and hills. takes you back to the ones you love as you sit on the gate of your jeep. strumming and thinking about old memories. your home (insert how you remember it) to the memories you have with the (girl you love ) or (friends and family)..... and then mix it all with your journey back to them. maybe through the heart journey or physically traveling back.