First of all great feedback and advice from Vicki and i like the way you're taken it.
Listen to your song and i have to say rough and all you got something but i will say your lyrics are singing a bit untidy, so if you dont mind maybe try it this way, letting your vocals fill in the commas and dots just keeping that flow.
Rolling down the interstate heavy clutch shifting gears
Wheels turning gears in my soul old Chevy
it’s a lonely drive this worlds flies by
country on my radio old dial im feeling low
Praying to god, give me peace, another chance
I let my woman go, ment the world to me
Like sunflowers on an old dirt road
With rolling golden, fields
Pulled off the interstate, taking the back way home
Where my momma grew up, family home
Where her boys would gather, at sundown
Im praying to god now, give me peace, another chance
I let my woman go, ment the world to me
Smileing cherry lips, kiss sweeter then, me
Praying to god, give me peace, another chance
I let my woman go, ment the world to me
Like sunflowers on an old dirt road
Smileing cherry lips, kiss sweeter then, me
Spoken word
God, this is not my home anymore, that old Chevy is going to take me back to her.
Damn it god i just hope you're on my side