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hi... some songs concepts

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ace_diace

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« on: May 10, 2016, 09:56:53 AM »
this is few ideas for songs... it done with fl studio, just concepts, nothing finished...
i'm not able to put vocals so its pretty much instrumentals with piano sounds instead of "singing"
please tell me waht you think about the melodys themselves and not the quality

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« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2016, 08:56:31 PM »
Hi Ace: 

Your first post on this forum asks us to INVEST time and energy reviewing four of your musical offerings before you have reviewed and provided feedback on ONE song from someone else. 

Why would we? 

If you are here to share feedback, you are welcome.  If you are here just to GET feedback, no one is likely to bother. 
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« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2016, 05:10:16 PM »
ok... i understand

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« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2016, 06:54:45 PM »
Hi Ace

I think the tone of hardtwist's reply was maybe a bit harsh. You're new around here, so you should be given a little time to orient yourself I think. We're a pretty friendly bunch and very supportive of songwriters of all levels of experience.

A good start would be to read the guidelines before posting (sticky at the top of this forum section) and then maybe post in the introductions forum, telling us a little about yourself.

Maybe have a quick browse/ listen of some other members threads, you'll soon get the hang of it.

Welcome aboard!

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« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2016, 07:29:49 PM »
Hi Ace

Welcome to the forum

I appreciate your eagerness to post your songs and you have definitely found the right place to get constructive feedback

I would suggest you take some time to read the guidelines here:
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=2564.0

The forum works on the basis that everyone reviews each other so I would suggest that you review a few other people (which I appreciate can be a little intimidating but just give your honest opinion in a sensitive way and you will be fine and it gets easier the more you do it)

The guidelines also ask that you only post one song at a time - so to increase your chances of getting feedback I will edit your original post to just leave the link to your first song

Please get stuck in reviewing and you will quickly find that the members will reciprocate and review your songs

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