Looking for any advice on improving this country lyric
She Never Asks - vs
It's eight o'clock, the kids are all in bed
She gets his dinner wrapped and in the fridge
The dishes done, at last puts up her feet
Tries to find something mindless on TV
She's hears the engine shut down in the drive
And the car keys jingle as he comes inside
She has questions - where he's been? who he saw?
But she never hears him answer them because..
- ch
She never asks what keeps him late
She never asks him to explain
The hint of perfume on his vest
The scent of bourbon on his breath
It's all the talk out on the street
Everyone else knows he's a cheat
But she'll be the last
'Cause she never asks
- vs
He says he stopped to eat some take-out at his desk
But his eyes betray him, saying something else
She knows they can't live forever in this lie
But she won't make accusations he'll deny
She never asks what keeps him late
She never asks him to explain
The hint of perfume on his chest
The scent of bourbon on his breath
It's common knowledge in their town
Everyone knows he fools around
But she lets it pass
And she never asks
- M8
Well she finally gets the courage up to leave
Her little sister puts them up in Tennessee
She soon finds a new love her kids adore
And
vows she'll never let dark secrets hid
Like they did before...
She never asked what kept him late
She never asked him to explain
The hint of perfume on his chest
The scent of bourbon on his breath
And now she wonders how he is
And if he's come to have regrets
But best to leave him in the past
And never ask
- tag
He's now behind her in the past
So she never asks.