[Paulski]

Hi Marrianna

Good to see you posting again - hope you are well
I'm just going to echo what others have said - good strong metaphorical lyric IMHCO
To me, the sections labeled "chorus" were Part B (or bridges) and the verses were Part A.

Nice work!
Paul

[PaulAds]

Yeah... I like this one too... Very nicely put together and says what it wants to say very well.

Excellent 

[Marrianna]

Hi Marriana,
                 it's a sweet and beautiful lyric,i too love the chorus,
so much talent on this forum,it's amazing,
                                                         welcome back,
                                                                               Tom.

Hi Tom,
Thankyou for your welcome. It was so good to see you here (with your reminders of Edward Lear). I discovered a coincidence concerning him. Amazing!
I appreciate your kind comment about Shadow Passing By and so pleased you like it. It has a very personal and emotional meaning for me. It is nice to know that the words have touched others too.
Good Luck with your writing and all in life
Marrianna

[Marrianna]

Hi Marrianna

Good to see you posting again - hope you are well
I'm just going to echo what others have said - good strong metaphorical lyric IMHCO
To me, the sections labeled "chorus" were Part B (or bridges) and the verses were Part A.

Nice work!
Paul

Hi Paulski,

Thanks for your 'echo' and I note your next comment about Part A and Part B. It is an interesting thought.

And, thankyou, I am quite well.

Marrianna

Hi Paulads,

Thankyou for commenting and liking. With this kind of song especially, that really means a lot.

Marrianna