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Blackscreen

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« on: May 09, 2016, 03:25:37 AM »
The song is at -> https://www.reverbnation.com/blackscreen/song/25880944-roaming

I wrote this in one sitting early this morning because I couldn't fall asleep. The lyrics are based around how hard it is to message a woman (man/etc) you care about because we all know texting never gets the point you're trying to make across... and sometimes it drives you crazy. Any feedback or critiques would be great and feel free to point me in the direction of something of yours.

For those who care about the lyrics, they're below:

How do you say, not show
True feelings between two phones?
Out of context, place, and time
The heart of words never align.

All you can do, is play it safe.
All you can do , is hope it relates.
Pretend that you're ok, and wait

I wonder what she'll say...

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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2016, 08:43:36 PM »
Nice song,

Got a nice dreamy feel about it.

Love the guitars and the echoes from the backing vocals.

Well done


Sandeep