A first draft of my first attempt at a folk song - an English folk song, that is. Open to advice on all aspects of this, lyrics, melody, changes, anything. It's recorded very quickly with no thought to production or sound quality - the door was open, planes and cars were passing, midway through the song one of the dogs jumped up and literally landed between me and the guitar and the microphone. In proper show-biz fashion I just carried on.
It's inspired by seeing a bit on the TV about the conditions that the navvies lived in back in the days of canals and early railway building. Figured that was proper material for a folk song -)
I suspect the title won't end up being "Digging" but for now that's what it is.
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13360805Digging, digging, digging your canal
Living, living in a place just like hell
We’ve not got a roof, no shelter at all
In the winter fields, praying for a thaw.
Digging, digging, digging where your coal boats will go
Up with the frost and the sleet and the snow
Ten tons a day, we never rest
Till the hearts stop beating deep in our chests
You sold us dreams / you sold them big
You shipped us in / and you said dig
Digging, digging, digging for your railway tracks
Breaking up rocks, breaking our backs
The boss has a whip, the foreman has a crop
The locals spit on the floor, and God has forgot
Digging, digging, digging just trying to make a hole
Somewhere to sleep, shelter from the cold
Leaving, leaving, I’m a long way from home
I can’t recall your face, or the way you held my bones
They sold us dreams / They sold them big
They shipped us in / and they said dig
Digging, digging, digging, o'er my grave they toil
They’ll bury me right here, in this foreign soil
Cold, cold, cold, the ice it finally won
I didn’t wake this morning, my digging days are done
They sold us dreams / They sold them big
They shipped us in / and they said dig