Hello everybody!
I have not posted on here for a while because my first work was terrible and I wanted to improve my writing skills a little bit so that I can understand and work with the feedback (also so I don't make a fool out of myself
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Recently I have written a song called 'Can't let you go'.
My ex has been using me for a little while and everytime I fell for it again and again.. I'm too weak to say no if my ex want to meet.
This lyric is based on all of that.
I love to write about my own experiences because then I'm very sure how I felt and its a great outlet.
I would like to hear from you if the lyrics are clear enough to understand the story.
Also, does it bother you if there aren't that much metaphors in the song?
All other feedback is ofcourse welcome as well!
I can't let you go
VERSE:
I fall in love to fast
I forget you to slow
I really want to move on
But I know..
Maybe I want to replace 'know' with 'don't'
When you're out of my mind
You find you're way back in
I think about our past, all the places
That we've been.
CHORUS:
I cant let you go
No matter how hard I try
I can never let you go
And I dont even know why
Our story continues
Everytime you scream my name
Our story is'nt over yet
'Cause you're in love with this game
VERSE:
It's been a long 4 months
Running through the dark
And when I saw a light
It seemed to be a spark
Really struggling with this one.. What I want to say with this one is that when I saw hope, it dissapeared again. I dont know if a spark is the right word for that.. Could use some help here.
And when I close my eyes
It's you in front of me
With your beautiful eyes, your smile
You want me back
Just me hoping that we could be back together
CHORUS:
I cant let you go
No matter how hard i try
I can never let you go
And I dont even know why
Our story continues
Everytime you scream my name
Our story is'nt over yet
'Cause you're in love with this game
BRIDGE:
And I know that this is wrong
holding on for way to long
And I know that it wont happen
You and me, getting back again
Aaah....
We will never getting back again..
Me convincing myself that we will never getting back together
CHORUS:
I cant let you go
No matter how hard i try
I can never let you go
And I dont even know why
Our story continues
Everytime you scream my name
Our story is'nt over yet
'Cause you're in love with this game
Looking forward to read and work with the feedback!
Lots of love,