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"Never Wrong"

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« on: April 13, 2016, 09:50:21 PM »
This is a bedroom recording of a song that isn't even totally written. Just a sketch of a song, that still needs lyrics (and still needs somebody who can sing the melody well).
Just curious for some feedback about the structure and bones of the thing.
https://soundcloud.com/poptodd/never-wrong
Thanks!

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« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2016, 02:09:31 PM »
That's sounding good to me! Catchy, like the lift in the chorus, and the major/minor play out at the end. One thing I might consider is that both the verse and chorus start on the same chord (the key chord). You could try playing around with an alternative to give it a different feel? But I'm not advocating it, I think the chorus lifts anyway, so probably once there is a bit more production it'll ping out great! Nice job!