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« on: July 15, 2011, 12:50:53 AM »
Hello, I'm Blank and I don't have anything to say.

Enough of that. I've never written a song in my life, except for one which I am working on. It has no real structure, so it is more a poem, and it is not the most complex of writings you will ever come across, but it is one that, I believe, relies on a heartfelt delivery more than anything. I appreciate that this is not the place for posting work, but seeing as it is essentially the best way to introduce myself, here is the aforementioned piece as it stands.



The whole picture
Is no longer
It is but a blemish
You couldn't be wronger

I live and I love but
I don't need this pity
Nobody knows me
Melted identity

It's not your fault
A fateful twist of life
More damaging than
Any sharp knife

I toss and I turn and
Not a night goes by
Without vivid images of
Those flames and sky

Flames and sky
Flames, flames and sky
Flames and sky
My face is my greatest lie



It would be interesting to see how people interpret it, but I should say that I did not write it about myself.

Anyway, I hope to learn a great deal from the wonderful people here and maybe, just maybe, start putting this mind to use on a regular basis. That'd be something else!

tone

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« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2011, 03:37:39 PM »
Hi Blank :)

Welcome to the forum - I hope you find the valuable feedback you're looking for, and decide to stick around.

Tone :)
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