Hi Folks.
In the past, I've done a few parodies and covers. Some of the parodies have done quite well; had many thousands of hits on Youtube and been featured in various publications. So far so good... But parodies aren't the same as creating something totally original, and that is what I want to do.
Why write this song? It started life in my head as "something in the style of Placebo" and then a melody popped into my head. The lyrics are somewhat to do with the times we live in, and the encroachments to our way of life - not necessarily caused by the obvious bogeymen, but by our own leaders.
This is my first ever song. First original lyrics, first melody, first everything. I can sing but have very little in the way of music theory. Hopefully this isn't /too/ glaringly obvious(!)
Genuinely looking for critique really! Fully aware it's a "work in progress" and pretty much everything about it needs re-working..
Song on Soundcloud :
https://soundcloud.com/that-hairy-bloke/resist-v3-still-draftLyrics :
Terror from across the sea
Terror flying into me
One more 'ism to terrify
Terror falling from the sky
Press and government conspire
Public fear and distrust higher
Desert; planes their bombs are falling
Civilian loss appalling
// Take care, resist
Don't give away that which they'd take by force
Take care, read up
This isn't lost, nor has it run its course //
Foreign policy's a no-win
All sides place on it their own spin
Crimes of action, crimes of none
While arms firms profit from the guns
Civil liberties were hard-fought
Privacy, freedom of speech; thought
When these things we have are lost
Everyone will bear the cost.
// Take care, resist
Don't give away that which they'd take by force
Take care, read up
This isn't lost, nor has it run its course //
// Don't give away that which they'd take by force //
Anyway.. Any feedback very welcome.