[Strit McKenzie]

Hi.

I'm new here - so bear with me...

[Modified - for your pleasure... Please see next post]

Thanks for your time.

[Strit McKenzie]

Failing to comply with community guidelines - a rookie mistake.

Anyways: I've been working on "Burning Eyes" some more - but its still not quite there, I think. So comments are still much appreciated.

Same goes for the lyrics - English is not my first language, so there might be some "Dang-lish" in there, that I'm not aware of.

Link: https://soundcloud.com/strit-mckenzie/burning-eyes-20160405
Lyrics:
Walk with me
Hold my hand
I'm freezing out here
Talk to me
Hold me tight
Tonight

Stay - won't you stay
Help is on the way

See the fire
Burning eyes
Its freezing out there
Kiss the waves
Catch your breath
Tonight

Stat - won't you stay
Help is on the way