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revenge is sweet
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den
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revenge is sweet
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February 27, 2016, 11:43:44 PM »
https://l.facebook.com/l.php?u=https%3A%2F%2Fcdn.fbsbx.com%2Fhphotos-xfp1%2Fv%2Ft59.3654-21%2F12712604_10207558424851694_1368495793_n.mp3%2Fmix-revenge.mp3%3Foh%3D4e7cc44356fe4413e41c51db3d66d4a3%26oe%3D56D45AF5%26dl%3D1&h=_AQFW0jDb
needs work I know, but its something I think could turn into a nice song.
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olivergearing
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Re: revenge is sweet
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February 28, 2016, 12:15:47 AM »
Hi mate, sounds interesting. What specifically are you looking for in terms of feedback?
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den
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Re: revenge is sweet
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February 28, 2016, 09:31:26 PM »
it needs something and I just don't know what it is. im happy with the backing, but it just needs something else. perhaps the backing vocals need arranging better, a lead instrument ?.
any suggestions welcome.
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