Hi guys, I'm completely new here (this is my first post ever!) and I wanted your thoughts and opinions on this song i've been working on. Say what you like, any criticism will be duly noted
I don't like to dream,
Cos bad things happen to me.
Imagination is overrated,
One more distraction from reality.
Lose your sense of self,
You know it's almost time.
Run away and hide,
Nothing's ever fine.
Your head is your hell,
But the air is so still.
Ponder what's missing,
Just one more hole to fill.
Cheers!
