Collab on this lyric

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josemar

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« on: February 01, 2016, 07:50:22 PM »
Hi,
Anyone out there like to collab on this finished (i think))...
may be suitable for folky rock, accoustic....possibly.
thanks,

Thoughts of broken love
Twistin' in decayin' seaweed
Please don't leave me reach that low
Thoughts of your love
Like the warm pure backwash
Washin' away grit from my soul

Chorus

When we lock eyes
I lock you in my mind
When I fall asleep
You're the one that sleeps
on a beach in my dream
a whispered voice sayin'
This is our....
… First time of forever
 First time of forever


Verse 11….

Rinse my past out                                               
it Falls on a cold dark stone
that I skim across a bitter surface
Shed all my fears
On a stranded sand spit
Let that be their final rest place

Chorus

When we lock eyes
I lock you in my mind
When I fall asleep
You're the one that walks
on a white beach in my dream
a whispered voice sayin'
This is our....
… First time of Forever
 First tide of forever
(First tide of forever)


Bridge

Wade through deep waters
but My salty lips won't quiver
cause I'm safe in your arms

Chorus

When we lock eyes
I lock you in my mind
When I fall asleep
You're the one that walks
on a white beach in my dream
the whispered voice that says…
This is our....
… First time of Forever
 First tide of forever
(First tide of forever)